Holy Psychedelia, Batman! I’m poking my toe a bit outside my comfort zone with this piece and it’s ultra-bright color scheme. Considering how many monochromatic pieces I’ve done recently, I felt the need to inject some vividness into my work.
By and large, adjectives are meaningless without their opposites. Our friend here wouldn’t seem so plain, ordinary or drained without the vibrancy glowing behind him. I envisioned the character as a creepy adult-kid (Creepy kids, by the way, are currently Japan’s biggest cultural export. I miss giant robots.). My wife, on the other hand, decided that he was a salariman. In either case, I think he’s having some problems finding his spark. I only feel this way after too little sleep, too much coffee, or a combination of the two.
I’m debating adding torn-paper leaves and flowers to the tree in the background. It would carry the green and red through the image a bit more, while also pushing the contrast between a landscape bursting with life and the man without any.
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This is great, he does look like a salary man, I could see this in a financial magazine. The colors are great, love the tree. I like the color of but not the roundedness of the bushes (mountains?) which is a weird/nit picky crit, but I think having all spikey shapes in the background would be a nicer contrast with the round shapes of the man. Again, a nit picky thing I don’t think most people would care about. This is actually one of my favorites by you!
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leaves and bits sound good, though right now it reminds me of one of the places the children visited in madeleine l’engle’s A Wrinkle in Time series…
i think because his face is so detailed and reflective (he looks like the glimpse you get of something on the surface of a pond), as are the branches of the tree (which you do fantastically well!), and the clouds, then a little detail on the bushes would probably tie them in to the overall
jeez when did i turn into an artist
anyway, i do enjoy it the way it is, but it would be fun to see what you do with additional details… like the banner up top
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Thanks all for your comments and suggestions! I’ll have to sit back and have a think about the leaves and flowers on the tree.
edhl – wow, it’s been so long since I read “Wrinkle”…but I have a vague memory of it. Ah, memories…
Brine – I totally get what you’re saying. It was, what? 600 entries this week? That’s insane!
Kathleen – I don’t know that movie. Guess it’s off to Rotten Tomatoes with me. And you’re right, they do seem a little Australian. Maybe it’s the red…



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